Question

【題目】 書面表達(dá)（共1題，計(jì)15分）

如今，隨著亞健康的人越來越多，更多的人開始關(guān)注健康。你認(rèn)為怎樣才能保持健康呢？請根據(jù)提示以“How to keep healthy”為題，寫一篇英語短文來簡單說一下保持健康的方法。

提示：

①平衡膳食；

②適當(dāng)鍛煉；

③早睡早起。

要求：

①短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

②80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

How to keep healthy

Everyone wants to be healthy, but do you know how to keep healthy?

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Keep Healthy

Health is very important for everybody.Then how can we do to keep healthy? You can try the following tips:

First,,you should have healthy eating habits.You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much meat.Don’t drink coffee too much,it’s bad for you.

Second,you can play sports.Sports can make you stronger and healthier.You can play baketball with your friends when you are free.You can go to the mouuntains with your family.

Third,Be happy.A happy man lives longer than a sad man .So sing a song or watch a fun movie.You can do anything to mak e you happy.

At last,stay away from smoking and drinking. Smoking and drinking are too bad for men .They can cause terrible illness.

If you do these things ,I believe you can be a healthy man.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文所給內(nèi)容比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些所給的點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，是提出建議，給出自己的觀點(diǎn)的，注意說話的語氣及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本例文層次緊湊，開始有總說，最后一段總結(jié)，中間四部分分別說明了題中給出的要點(diǎn)。用first,second,third,at last層次鮮明，邏輯性很強(qiáng)。因?yàn)槲恼率翘岢鼋ㄗh，所以范文中用了許多委婉的表達(dá)，如should ,You’d better等。