Question

我校開展“讀好書，促成長”的活動(dòng)，讀書恰好是你最喜歡的課外活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這次活動(dòng)的主題，參考表格中所給的的信息并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫一篇倡議書，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。

意義	獲取信息，增長見識(shí)，使人快樂，有助于成長等
現(xiàn)狀	聽音樂、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占去了學(xué)生大部分的課外閱讀時(shí)間
倡議	多讀書，讀好書

要求：1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右。
2．倡議書必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚，書寫規(guī)范
3．開頭結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
My dear friends,
Reading is very important in our life.________________________________________
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___________________Let’s start reading now!

Answer 1

My dear friends,
Reading is very important in our life. We can get knowledge by reading a lot of good books. It can not only open up our eyes but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more important books. Reading also helps us grow up better.
However, many activities take up much of our reading time , such as listening to music, watching TV and going online. What a pity! So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will be very helpful for us !
Let's start reading now!

試題分析：本文屬于給出一個(gè)主題，對(duì)這個(gè)主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行論述。首先論述讀書對(duì)我們的好處，可從獲取知識(shí)，使人明智，有助于成功等多個(gè)方面進(jìn)行闡述；其次對(duì)于現(xiàn)在的學(xué)生如何花費(fèi)時(shí)間來論述，說明現(xiàn)狀；最后陳述觀點(diǎn)，發(fā)出倡議。按照提綱中的三部分內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，這樣做到不遺漏要點(diǎn)同時(shí)也表達(dá)充分得體。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】在對(duì)于諸如此類文章的寫作，學(xué)生在平時(shí)的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達(dá)多個(gè)好處的句型。如be good for, benefit, useful等單詞短語。英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換，同時(shí)注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫出新意，寫出文采，本文就較好地注意到了這幾點(diǎn)，論述的有理有據(jù)，頭頭是道，而且關(guān)聯(lián)詞的恰當(dāng)使用也很突出，如not only…but also，還有比較級(jí)的準(zhǔn)確使用都很到位。