Question

14．假如你應邀參加一個國際讀書會，并將分享自己讀過的一本好書．請根據(jù)下列表格中的要點，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你要分享的書．

Key points （要點）	Word and  expressions for reference．（參考詞匯）
What the name is	The old man and the sea	…
Who wrote it	Ernest Hemingway，America．	…
What it is about	Fisherman fight against fish and nature．	…
Why I like it	Meaningful，never give up，well known  sentence"man is not made for defeat"．	Interesting，helpful， Well-known sentence …

注意：（1）可選擇使用所給的書名及內(nèi)容，也可另選書籍．
     （2）短文內(nèi)容可適當增加；
     （3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名．
     （4）詞數(shù)80-100；
     （5）短文首句僅供選擇使用不計入總詞數(shù)．
   短文首句：The book I'd like to share with you is the old man and the sea．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
This book tells about a fisherman①who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea，but finds②it hard to take it home這本書講述了一個足夠幸運的能抓住大魚的漁夫，但是發(fā)現(xiàn)很難帶回家．
①who作為關系詞的定語從句，修飾fisherman．
②it作為形式賓語，動詞不定式做真正賓語．
【高分句型二】
This tells us ①that nothing seems terrible②as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart這個告訴我們只要我們有強大的意志和勇敢的心沒有什么似乎是可怕的．
①that引導的賓語從句．
②as long as只要，引導的條件狀語從句

解答 The book I'd like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea，written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway．（書名和作者）This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea，but finds it hard to take it home．【高分句型一】On the way back，he has to fight against the fish，and the sea as well．（內(nèi)容）
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties．I still remember the well-known sentence from the book：Man is not made for defeat．This tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart【高分句型二】．（喜愛的理由）

點評 寫作要抓住要點．要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子要進行默寫，這樣在寫作時就能寫出準確地道的作文．