Question

【題目】書面表達

今天是6月21日，父親節(jié)。假設(shè)你是李明，你早起為爸爸做早餐，煮了一碗雞蛋面條�，F(xiàn)在請你按照下表提示內(nèi)容，用英語寫一則日記。

煮面條的過程	水，雞蛋，面條，佐料┄┄（3—4個步驟）
爸爸吃面條后的感受	美味，高興，夸獎┄┄
你的想法和打算	自豪，感恩，祝福，多幫助父母分擔(dān)家務(wù)┄┄

要求：

1.請使用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞敘述做面條的過程。

2.可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，但是文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名。

3.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范。

4.次數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Sunday, June 21 Sunny

Today is Father’s day. I got up early and

Answer 1

【答案】

Sunday, June 21 Sunny

Today is Father’s Day. I got up early and I cooked breakfast for my father. First, I boiled some water in the pot and cooked eggs and noodles in it for a few minutes. Then I cut up some vegetables and meat, put them in another pot of hot soup. Finally, I put the noodles in the big bowl, added eggs, meat, vegetables and some salt. My father had the noodles happily. He said it was delicious. I felt proud and happy, too. From now on, I will help my parents do more housework. I hope my parentsare in good health forever.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇日記格式的作文。在父親節(jié)那天李明為父親做早飯。文中介紹了做早飯的過程；爸爸吃飯后的感受及作者的想法都描述的較清楚。我們要做的就是用適當(dāng)?shù)木涫�，合適的連詞，用英語把它們表達出來。

寫作亮點：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色。如： My father had the noodles happily；He said it was delicious;I will help my parents do more housework. 表示順序的詞：First， Then，等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，讓文章更出彩。