Question

11．親愛的同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束！在此離別之際，恰逢21世紀(jì)英語周刊征稿，請(qǐng)你以"A/An …Person in My School Life"為題，介紹一位老師或同學(xué)，描述一件發(fā)生在你們之間的、令你印象深刻的事情并談?wù)勀愕母惺埽?br />                 A/An ____ Person in My School Life
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She is the best friend①I've made in the class，②who is always there for me ③when I am in need of help她是我班上交的最好的朋友，總是在我需要幫助的時(shí)候支持我．
①省略了who的定語從句，修飾friend，who作為賓語，故省略．
②who引導(dǎo)的非限制定語從句，修飾friend．
③when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
"A friend in need is a friend indeed"．患難見真情．
諺語的使用．

解答 A Helpful Person in My School Life
I have met a lot of people in my school life．One of them is my good friend Emma．She is the best friend I've made in the class，who is always there for me when I am in need of help．（給我?guī)椭�最大的是艾瑪）【高分句型一�?br />Recently，I found myself getting upset easily．I often complained about the stress and even couldn't concentrate on studies．Emma noticed my problem and spent two hours with me one day，talking about her own stress and how she was dealing with difficulties．From her，I learnt that the only way to beat difficulties is keeping trying instead of complaining．And I felt much more confident to fight against them together with Emma．（所經(jīng)歷的事情）
"A friend in need is a friend indeed"．【高分句型二】A good friend is who makes you happy when you are crying and strong when you are giving in，and that is Emma to me．（感受）

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