Question

書面表達(dá)
根據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內(nèi)容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信。（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其字?jǐn)?shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)）
假設(shè)你叫李明，是美國中學(xué)生Tom的筆友。請(qǐng)您根據(jù)他給你的電子郵件內(nèi)容寫一封回信。談?wù)勀阆矚g讀的書及你對(duì)讀書這種愛好的看法。

Dear Li Ming, I’d like to know what you often do in your free time. Do you spend much time on reading? What do you think about reading? I like reading novels (小說) very much. My favourite book is Jane Eyre. It was written by Charlotte Bronte. She was born in Britain. She was a famous writer in the world. She wrote many books and Jane Eyre was one of the best. In this book, she wrote about a woman named Jane Eyre. Jane Eyre wasn’t pretty, but she had a strong idea of self-respect (自尊心). She never gave up whenever she met any difficulties in her life. I was deeply moved by her story. I like the book very much. Yours, Tom

 
Hi Tom,
It’s very nice to hear that you like reading a lot.
                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  
                                                                  
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Hi Tom,
It’s very nice to hear that you like reading a lot. It seems that we have the same hobby. I enjoy reading as well. In my free time, I usually spend one hour or more in reading, such as novels, newspapers, plays and so on. One of my favourite books is Romeo and Juliet. It is one of Shakespeare’s most famous plays and he wrote it in 1595. The play tells the story of two young lovers. They cannot be together because of the two families. The two lovers die at the end of the play. Although it is a sad story, I still like it because it tells us what the true love is. I advise you to read it if you haven’t read it before. In my opinion, reading is an excellent hobby. It can bring us enjoyment and success. It can also make us grow as a person, develop our interest and help us learn more knowledge.
Yours,
Li Ming

解析試題分析：本文的寫作首先對(duì)Tom和自己有同樣的愛好表示非常高興，然后介紹自己在空閑時(shí)間經(jīng)常看書最喜歡的書是什么，可以用One of my favourite books來表達(dá)，進(jìn)而介紹這本書所主要講述的內(nèi)容，故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展、結(jié)局和我為什么喜歡它的原因等，最后發(fā)表自己的對(duì)閱讀書籍的看法，它能帶給我們成功和喜悅，幫助我們學(xué)習(xí)到更多的知識(shí)，可用It can bring us enjoyment and success，help us learn more knowledge.等來進(jìn)行表達(dá)。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：初一英語的作文，學(xué)生首先要將題目審清楚，抓住要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作。平時(shí)的作文寫作著重培養(yǎng)連詞成句的能力，要在“準(zhǔn)”字上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面。對(duì)于中學(xué)作文的寫作，盡量將所學(xué)的知識(shí)運(yùn)用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫，考試時(shí)就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。