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13．2012年，溧水被評(píng)為"南京文明縣城"（Nanjing Civilized City）． 你學(xué)校的English Club 正在舉辦以"文明溧水，持續(xù)文明"為題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下的內(nèi)容提示及要求寫(xiě)一篇應(yīng)征稿．
提示：◆尊敬師長(zhǎng)，明禮誠(chéng)信◆友善待人，樂(lè)于助人
◆遵守交通，不闖紅燈◆保護(hù)環(huán)境，（寫(xiě)2-3個(gè)例子）
要求：1）詞數(shù)80左右，不包含已給出的句子的詞數(shù)．
2）內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范．
參考詞匯：respect（v．尊敬），polite，honest，obey（遵守），traffic lights，protect the environment，run a red light/to pass a red light/to disobey traffic lights（闖紅燈）
Civilized Lishui Going on
We are glad that Lishui is now among the Nanjing Civilized City．As a student，what shall we do to keep up the good work？First of all，weshould respect our teachers，parents and theold．Also，we ought to be polite and honest．Second，it's always good to bekind，friendly and helpful to others．Third，we must obey traffic rules andmustn't cross the road when the traffic lights are red．Last but not the least，it's important and necessary to help protect the environment．
For example，we shoudln't spithere and there or throw litter carelessly．We'd better not pick flowers or stepon the grass．
In short，if everyone makes contributions，our city will be better and better．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)"文明溧水，持續(xù)文明"的應(yīng)征稿，談?wù)勆�活中該怎樣保持文明．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一、三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．尊敬師長(zhǎng)，明禮誠(chéng)信
2友善待人，樂(lè)于助人
3遵守交通，不闖紅燈
4保護(hù)環(huán)境（寫(xiě)2-3個(gè)例子）
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
ought to 應(yīng)該
obey rules 遵守規(guī)則
last but not the least 最后也是最重要的
had better do sth 最好做某事
【高分句型】
1．Third，we must ①obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the road ②when the traffic lights are red．
①obey rules 遵守規(guī)則
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
2．①Last but not the least，②it's important and necessary to help protect the environment．
①last but not the least 最后也是最重要的
②it is+adj+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．

解答 Civilized Lishui Going on
  We are glad that Lishui is now among the Nanjing Civilized City．As a student，what shall we do to keep up the good work？First of all，we should respect our teachers，parents and the old．Also，we ought to be polite and honest．（尊敬師長(zhǎng)，明禮誠(chéng)信）Second，it's always good to be kind，friendly and helpful to others．（友善待人，樂(lè)于助人）Third，we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the road when the traffic lights are red．【高分句型】（遵守交通，不闖紅燈）Last but not the least，it's important and necessary to help protect the environment．【高分句型】（保護(hù)環(huán)境）For example，we shoudln't spit here and there or throw litter carelessly．We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass．（舉例）
   In short，if everyone makes contributions，our city will be better and better．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上．語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．