Question

【題目】請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中的信息，寫一篇介紹白鱀豚的段文（80個(gè)詞左右）.

Nane	baiji (a kind of dolphin)
Other nanes	Chinese river dolphin,underwater panda
Living place	Middle part of Yangtze River
Have babies	Only one every two years
At birth	80~90 cm,3~5 kilos
Adult	1.4~2.5 meters,135~230 kilos
Food	Small fish,10 kilos a day
Life	25 years
Activities	In deep water,swim 60 km/h,afraid of people,group life

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

There is a kind of dolphin,and its name is baiji. It has other names, such as Chinese river dolphin, underwater panda. It lives in middle part of Yangtze River. It has only one every two years. When it was born, it is 80-90 centimeters high and 3-5kilograms heavy. When it grows up, it is 1.4-2.5 meters high and 135-230 kilograms heavy. It likes eating small fish and it can have 10 kilograms a day. It can live up to 25 years. It often plays in deep water. And it can swim at the speed of 60 kilometers per hour. But it is afraid of people. So it lives a group life. The dolphin is so lovely that we all love it.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹一只名叫baiji的海豚。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It has...，When it grows up...,It likes ...,It can live up to ...,The dolphin is ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了海豚的名字，接下來(lái)介紹它的生活地點(diǎn)，外貌，食物和壽命，最后指出海豚如此的可愛(ài)以至于我們都喜歡它。此處such as, every two years, grow up, at the speed of, so that等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。