Question

【題目】Writing (作文) (共20分)

Write at least 60 words about the topic “An Unforgettable Experience” (以“一次難忘的經(jīng)歷”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)

初中生活即將結(jié)束，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多難以忘懷的經(jīng)歷。請談?wù)劻钅汶y忘、值得回憶的一次經(jīng)歷。

Phrases for reference (以下短語僅供參考)：

graduate from… a meaningful activity

enjoy oneself remember…forever

（ 注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

Answer 1

【答案】

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others。

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)寫一篇關(guān)于中學(xué)生活的文章。注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化。講述過去的事情用一般過去時(shí)；講述現(xiàn)在的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；展望未來用一般將來時(shí)。詞數(shù)為80個(gè)左右，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：文中使用了不少短語和句型，為文章增色不少。如be eager to do sth，do well in，give up，little by little，No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.等等。