Question

11．在日常學習和生活中，你一定得到過很多人的幫助和關(guān)愛，此時此刻你會有很多感謝的話要說，請根據(jù)下面所給的提示用英語寫一篇短文．
提示：
1．感謝的人：親人、老師、同學…
2．感謝他們的原因：生活方面、學習方面…
3．對他們的美好祝福．
要求：
1．內(nèi)容包括所給提示；
2．寫作中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；
3．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
4．文章開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)．
    In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now，I want to express my thanks to them．First，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①When I②have problems with my study，they are so patient and helpful．
①when引導的時間狀語從句．
②have problems with …在某方面有困難
【高分句型二】
I will remember the days when we play and study together．
we play and study together由關(guān)系副詞when引導的定語從句，修飾先行詞the days．

解答 In my life，I get lots of help and love from many people．Now I want to express my thanks to them．First，I want to thank my parents．They provide a happy life for me．They do much for me and give me so much love．（感謝父母及原因）Second，I want to thank my teachers．They are always busy doing their work．When I have problems with my study，they are so patient and helpful．【高分句型一】（感謝老師及原因）Third，I want to thank my classmates．They make me feel less lonely．I will remember the days when we play and study together．【高分句型二】（感謝同學及原因）
Thank you，my parents，my teachers and my classmates．I hope you are in good health and have a better future．（美好祝愿）

點評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細節(jié)．