Question

初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請(qǐng)你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過(guò)和事后你的感想(請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱以及真實(shí)姓名)。 提示詞語(yǔ)： three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry  

Answer 1

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others。

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于中學(xué)生活的文章。注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化。講述過(guò)去的事情用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；講述現(xiàn)在的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；展望未來(lái)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。詞數(shù)為80個(gè)左右，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了不少短語(yǔ)和句型，為文章增色不少。如be eager to do sth，do well in，give up，little by little，No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.等等。