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3．最近，你們班就"幸福是什么"進(jìn)行了一次討論，學(xué)生們發(fā)表了各自的看法．

Tom	如果少看電視，多運(yùn)動(dòng)，擁有健康的飲食，感到幸福．
Kate	當(dāng)我們采取措施減少污染，公園里能看到花、聽(tīng)到鳥(niǎo)兒歌唱就感到幸福．
Mary	當(dāng)我們過(guò)上綠色生活時(shí)，感到幸福．
Millie	組織一次慈善義演，幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童重返校園，為他們捐錢，送玩具．
你自己	…（回憶你經(jīng)歷的使你感到幸福的一件事情．）

要求：1．最后一點(diǎn)要展開(kāi)合理的想象，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮．
2．詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
What is happiness？
Happiness is different to different people．But it is important in our daily life．It is always around you if you put your heart into it．
Tom thinks he will feel happy if he watches less TV，take more exercise and have a healthy diet．
Kate thinks she will feel happy if the government takes action（does something） to reduce pollution and she can hear birds sing and can see beautiful flowers in the park..Mary thinks she will feel happy if we live a green life．Millie thinks she will feel happy if she can organize a charity show，help children in poor areas return to school，donate money to them and give （send） them toys．I think I will feel happy if I can spend time with my parents and my friends，I will be happy．
When we think of these things，we realize that happiness is all around us．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Tom ①he will feel happy ②if he watches less TV，take more exercise and have a healthy diet湯姆認(rèn)為如果少看電視，多運(yùn)動(dòng)，擁有健康的飲食，就會(huì)感到幸福．
①think后是省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則
【高分句型二】
Kate thinks①she will feel happy②if the government ③takes action to reduce pollution and she can hear birds sing and can see beautiful flowers in the park凱特認(rèn)為當(dāng)我們采取措施減少污染，公園里能看到花、聽(tīng)到鳥(niǎo)兒歌唱就感到幸福．
①think后是省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則
③take action to do sth采取行動(dòng)做某事

解答 What is happiness？
Happiness is different to different people．But it is important in our daily life．It is always around you if you put your heart into it．
Tom thinks he will feel happy if he watches less TV，take more exercise and have a healthy diet．【高分句型一】
Kate thinks she will feel happy if the government takes action to reduce pollution and she can hear birds sing and can see beautiful flowers in the park．【高分句型二】．Mary thinks she will feel happy if we live a green life．Millie thinks she will feel happy if she can organize a charity show，help children in poor areas return to school，donate money to them and give （send） them toys．（同學(xué)們的看法）I think I will feel happy if I can spend time with my parents and my friends，I will be happy．（我的看法）
When we think of these things，we realize that happiness is all around us．

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