Question

【題目】假如你是琳琳，你的美國(guó)朋友Susan正在重慶旅行。磁器口是重慶最受歡迎的地方之一。你將向她推薦磁器口。

請(qǐng)以“A Place You Will Never Forget-- Ciqikou”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。

內(nèi)容包括：

1. 磁器口位于重慶城西部，嘉陵江邊，擁有數(shù)百年的歷史，是一個(gè)觀光旅行的好地方。

2. 磁器口的特色 a. 美食 b. 美景 (針對(duì)a， b 兩點(diǎn)舉一到兩個(gè)例子，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)

注意：語(yǔ)言流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔，不少于80詞。

文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名，學(xué)校、班級(jí)。

A Place You Will Never Forget---Ciqikou

Susan, I’d like to introduce Ciqikou to you.

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Linlin

Answer 1

【答案】

A Place You Will Never Forget---Ciqikou

Susan, I’d like to introduce Ciqikou to you. Ciqikou lies in the west of Chongqing City, near the Jialing River, It has hundreds of years” history. There is no doubt it is a good place to go sightseeing.

There are a lot of beatiful and historic place in Ciqikou. There are a lot of temples like Po Lun temple, Genting temple, Fuyuan temple. Every year thousands of tourists go there. The other place that we must visit is the teahouse. On the 100 metre long street there are 13 houses, and each house is full of people.

As far the food , you mustn’t miss chaffy dish. It's a symbol of Chongqing. There are other nice food in Ciqikou When you come ,you can taste them.

Hope you have a great trip.

Linlin

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文要寫(xiě)的材料第一方面給的比較具體，主要介紹瓷器口的位置，歷史等。第二點(diǎn)要求就瓷器口的美景和美食進(jìn)行介紹，在介紹時(shí)可以選取自己熟悉的一兩點(diǎn)介紹。主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意行文的連詞。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色.如: There is no doubt，The other place that we must visit…, As far the food等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。