Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)(20分)

最近，你班就“Your Ideal Job”展開(kāi)了一次調(diào)查。下表是你們小組的情況， 請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向英語(yǔ)校刊投稿。

組員	個(gè)性	理想職業(yè)	原因
Millie	有耐心	青少年輔導(dǎo)員	喜歡幫助青少年解決壓力問(wèn)題，并給予他們有價(jià)值的建議
Kate	細(xì)心	醫(yī)生	1.(自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容) 2. 喜歡研究顏色，想用顏色改變?nèi)藗兊牟缓们榫w
Daniel	樂(lè)于助人	志愿者	1.(自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容) 2. 愿意為血癌病人獻(xiàn)造血干細(xì)胞。
你	有創(chuàng)造力	工程師	(自擬兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容)

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右(短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。

Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Millie is very patient. She wants to be a youth worker. When she grows up, she likes to help teenagers solve their problems of stress and offer / give them valuable suggestions / advice. Kate is careful, so her ideal job is a doctor. She wants to save more people’s lives. She likes studying colors. She wants to use colours to change people’s bad moods / she wants to change people’s bad moods with colours. Daniel is helpful. He wants to be a volunteer in the future. He thinks it’s meaningful to help people in need. He is willing to donate his blood cells to the person who has blood cancer/with blood cancer. I am creative. I like to be an engineer. I like designing and making things. I want to design/build the most modern high-speed railway connecting my hometown to other big cities in China

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題材料作文。本文所給的材料比較詳細(xì)。我們要把這些材料用正確的英語(yǔ)把它表達(dá)出來(lái)，動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)要求可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)是第三人稱(chēng)。寫(xiě)作中注意人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致問(wèn)題，同時(shí)注意上下文的聯(lián)系，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的全部?jī)?nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在句子的結(jié)構(gòu)上很好地使用了簡(jiǎn)單句。文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)文章還用了一些常用的句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增添了不少色彩。