Question

近來，全國很多城市受霧霾天氣的影響，鹽城尤為嚴重。請你根據(jù)下表提示的信息用英語寫一篇短文，簡單介紹其情況，并談談你自己的觀點（至少兩條）。

Problems	air pollution    health problem children and old people get ill
Causes	factories give off … cut down     cars…
Ways	take a bus     ride a bike when…    do fewer outdoor activities
Opinions	… …

注意：1．短文應包括所給內容要點，可適當發(fā)揮，使文章連貫
2．詞數(shù)：90左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Nowadays, smog hits many cities in our country, especially in Yancheng．Air pollution                      
                                                                                

Answer 1

Nowadays, smog hits many cities in our country, especially in Yancheng．Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, causing a lot of health problems. At the same time, children and old people get ill easier than before. The main reason of the smog is the fact that factories give off a lot of harmful gases. Many trees are being cut down and the number of the private cars is even larger. If we want to have a healthy living condition and share the fresh air, we’d better take a bus or ride a bike to go to work or go to school. When the smog is very heavy, we can do fewer outdoor activities. In my opinion, we should plant more trees and reduce the use of cars. Let’s act together to make the sky bluer and the air fresher.

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照題目要求并結合表格中的內容完成這篇有關霧霾的寫作，我們要用恰當?shù)恼Z言把所列舉的內容準確地表達出來。寫作中要包含霧霾的危害、原因、解決辦法及發(fā)表個人的見解等幾個方面進行陳述，表達出對此問題的觀點等。根據(jù)材料內容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱主要是第一、三人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文詳細、全面地闡明了自己對該問題的看法，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含非謂語動詞及同位語從句的準確使用為文章增色不少.如causing a lot of health problems，At the same time,， In my opinion,，the fact that factories give off a lot of harmful gases，make the sky bluer and the air fresher學習中再注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。