Question

3．你年級(jí)決定本周日進(jìn)行一次外出活動(dòng)（have a school trip），請(qǐng)你負(fù)責(zé)將此消息傳達(dá)給來(lái)自英國(guó)的交換生．

提示語(yǔ)：walk to Fenghuang Mountain． 10 kilometers away．hard but exciting． the whole day．keep safe．behave．things to take（food，drinks…）…

要求：
1．參考提示語(yǔ)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)地名和姓名；
4．詞數(shù)：60-80詞．（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．）
Hello，everyone!
___________
That's all．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
What's more，it is important for us to keep safe on the way．
這句話(huà)使用句式為：it is+形容詞+for sb to do sth，句中"what's more"意為"再者，而且"．這句話(huà)意為：再者，在路上注意安全對(duì)我們很重要．
高分句型二：
I think we'll have a nice trip．
句中"we'll have a nice trip"為賓語(yǔ)從句，這句話(huà)意為：我認(rèn)為我們會(huì)有一次美好的旅行．

解答 Hello，everyone!
May I have your attention，please？Have you ever had a hard but exciting trip？Now I've got good news to tell you．This Sunday，we are going to have a school trip．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）
We'll walk to Fenghuang Mountain，It's about 10 kilometers away from our school．As we'll be away for the whole day，please remember the following things．Take enough food acid drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes．What's more，it is important for us to keep safe on the way．【高分句型一】（介紹這次活動(dòng)及注意事項(xiàng)）
I think we'll have a nice trip．【高分句型二】（期待旅行）
That's all．
Thank you!

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