Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

學(xué)校將在下周舉行英文演講比賽，Jack的話題是 “對(duì)我影響最深的人”，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下材料，幫他組織一篇100字左右英文演講稿，介紹一下三位對(duì)他影響最深的人，并說說你的感想。

Persons	Job	Details
My mother	a teacher	1. 四十幾歲; 2. 充滿愛心（至少舉一例說明）; 3. 決定死后捐獻(xiàn)遺體。
Tan Dun	a composer	1. 出生于中國(guó)，湖南；2. 熱愛天籟之音，用普通東西創(chuàng)作音樂; 3. 幫助建立東西方音樂之橋。
Spud Webb	an NBA player	1. 個(gè)頭矮小，夢(mèng)想進(jìn)入 NBA; 2. 一直為夢(mèng)想而奮斗; 3. 1985年成為NBA球員。

注意：

1.表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2.詞數(shù)100左右，短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3.表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名和姓名。

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Spud Webb.

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Answer 1

【答案】The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Spud Webb.

My mother is a teacher. She is in her forties. She has a heart full of love. She often donates money to children in poor areas. She has decided to donate her body after she die.

Tan Dun is a famous composer, who was born in Hunan, China. He loves beautiful music. He

Spud Webb is an NBA player. When he was young, he dreamed to become a member of NBA. But he was refused because he was too short. Without losing heart, he kept on working hard. At last in 1985, he successfully became a member of NBA.

They are all my heroes. They are really worth learning from.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹三位對(duì)我影響最深的人，并說說我的感想。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am happy to……，My mother is……，She has……，When he was……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。