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11．隨著揚(yáng)州經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升，同時(shí)我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴(yán)重．去年冬天霧霾（the thick haze）天氣接二連三出現(xiàn)，生活環(huán)境日趨惡化．就此，你班展開(kāi)討論美麗揚(yáng)州應(yīng)該從何做起．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，向報(bào)社投稿．

揚(yáng)州現(xiàn)狀	美麗揚(yáng)州從我做起	未來(lái)展望
1．車輛越來(lái)越多 2．空氣越來(lái)越差 3．…	1．出門做公交 2．… 3．…	1．水更清，天更藍(lán) 2．… 3．…．

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名．
100詞左右（開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
With the development of Yangzhou，more and more families have cars．                        ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
And many people got sick because of the polluted air．許多人由于空氣污染而生�。甮ot sick 生病；because of 因?yàn)椋?br />高分句型二
 If each of us tries our best to protect our environment，we will enjoy bluer sky and cleaner rivers．如果我們每個(gè)人都盡力保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境，我們將享受更藍(lán)的天空和更清潔的河流．這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句是一般將來(lái)時(shí)，從句用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．

解答 With the development of Yangzhou，more and more families have cars．However，the environment of our city is becoming worse and worse．Last winter，we experienced several days of the worst air pollution in history．And many people got sick because of the polluted air【高分句型一，注意固定詞組的使用】．【要點(diǎn)一，揚(yáng)州現(xiàn)狀】
As the students of this ancient city，we should take actions to beautify our hometown．We can take buses to go out； we can ask our relatives not to drive cars as often as possible．What's more，we can call on the whole society to plant more trees．【要點(diǎn)二，美麗揚(yáng)州從我做起】
If each of us tries our best to protect our environment，we will enjoy bluer sky and cleaner rivers【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．Yangzhou will be more suitable and comfortable to live in．【要點(diǎn)三，未來(lái)展望】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．