Question

【題目】寫作
動(dòng)物是我們?nèi)祟惖暮门笥�，但是越來越多的�?dòng)物正瀕臨滅絕。而我們該如何保護(hù)動(dòng)物呢？請以How to protect animals 為題寫一篇短文，呼吁人們熱愛動(dòng)物、保護(hù)動(dòng)物。詞數(shù)80左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
提示：停止殺戮；保護(hù)動(dòng)物的家園。
Howto protect animalsAnimals are our good friends. But now more and moreanimals are in danger.

Answer 1

【答案】例文：
How to protect animals
Animals are our good friends. But now more and more animals are in danger. As a friend of animals, what should we do to protect them? First, I think we should learn to live with animals in peace, so we must stop killing wild animals. Second, we can't cut down so many trees, because we are taking away their homes. As a result, we should plant more and more trees. Finally the government should set up more nature parks for them. I think if we love animals and we are kind to them, our life will bebetter and better.
【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的重要性。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱進(jìn)行敘述，注意主謂一致問題。句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
一、閱讀提示，弄清所有信息，明確寫作要點(diǎn)。
1. 作為動(dòng)物的朋友，我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)它們。
2. 我們應(yīng)該與動(dòng)物和平相處，停止殺戮它們。
3.保護(hù)動(dòng)物家園，不能砍伐太多樹木，應(yīng)該種更多樹。
4. 政府應(yīng)該建立更多自然公園來保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物。
5.結(jié)論：如果我們愛護(hù)動(dòng)物，我們的生活會(huì)越來越好。
二、根據(jù)要點(diǎn)，寫出關(guān)鍵詞、短語或句子。
as a friend of；protectlive； with animals in peace；stop killing；cut down； as a result；more and more；set up；better and better
三、組詞成句。連句成篇。注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。