Question

15．假如你是Tina，請你寫一封電子郵件給你的朋友Bob，向他講述你的假期情況．內(nèi)容包括：1去昆明度假了，在昆明的情況（人，環(huán)境，天氣等）2 在昆明的活動(dòng)計(jì)劃和安排（至少3項(xiàng)活動(dòng)）．3 你的感受． 4 詢問bob的假期情況以及告訴他你在期待他的回信．作文要求：語句連貫，詞數(shù)60個(gè)左右．
Dear Bob，
How is it going？I am writing to tell you about my vacation．                        
Yours，
Tina

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I am writing to tell you about my vacation．我寫信是想告訴你我的假期．句子中write to do sth表示寫信去做某事．
②I hope you can write to me soon and tell me about you vacation．我希望你能盡快給我寫信告訴我你的假期．句子中hope后面跟的是一個(gè)賓語從句．

解答 Dear Bob，
How is it going？I am writing to tell you about my vacation（高分句型）．（引出話題）
My family and I went to Kunming on vacation．It was warm and sunny here and the people here are friendly to us．It was beautiful here．We all like this place because the weather was always good and there were kinds of flowers．（在昆明的情況）
    We went sighting and tasted different kinds of food．We climbed Yulong Mountains and took some photos．We went fishing and boating in the beautiful countryside．（在昆明的活動(dòng)計(jì)劃和安排）
    We have a relaxing vacation and we all had a good time here．How about you？I hope you can write to me soon and tell me about you vacation（高分句型）．（我的感受及詢問Bob的假期情況以及告訴他你在期待他的回信．）
                                                                  Yours，
Tina

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