Question

【題目】你校將組織英語作文比賽，請根據(jù)所給提示，以“Live a Colourful Life”為題，寫一篇短文參賽。

注意事項(xiàng)：

1.詞數(shù):100詞左右(文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息;

3.文章必須包含所提供的主要信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Live a Colourful Life

Life is a gift. We should do what is interesting and meaningful to_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Life is a gift. We should do what is interesting and meaningful to make our life colorful. What should we do to make it colorful?

First, as the old saying goes, never too old to learn. So we should read books every day. Second, except our work, we should know how to spend our spare time. So we should learn some new skills. For example, we can learn how to take photos or learn a new language. Maybe it is challenging at first. But it will benefit us a lot. Third, we should know something about art and enjoy different art forms. Last but not the least, we should often do some sports. Because health is the most important to all of us.

I hope everybody can have a colorful life and enjoy every day.

【解析】

本文是一篇材料作文。要求Live a Colourful Life為題，根據(jù)所給材料內(nèi)容寫出我們應(yīng)該怎樣才能活出多彩的生活，人稱用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們只需要用正確的句子把他們表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)加入自己的語言寫出具有連貫性和層次性的文章。寫作時(shí)注意緊扣主題，層次要分明，中心要突出，語言要盡量簡單，可以適當(dāng)使用復(fù)合句，使文章具有一定的連貫性。寫完后注意檢查語言使用的正確性。本篇文章使用了總分總的文章結(jié)構(gòu)，中間主體部分使用了First….Second….Third….使文章層次非常清晰明了，最后提出自己的期望，起到對上文總結(jié)的作用，非常不錯(cuò)的一篇文章。