Question

16．假如你是Alice，你想寫一封推薦信，推薦你的同學(xué)Daniel獲得今年的新星獎(jiǎng)．推薦
信字?jǐn)?shù)為100詞左右．開(kāi)頭，結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．

Excellent qualities （優(yōu)秀的品質(zhì)）	Good examples （好的事例）
樂(lè)于助人	1．經(jīng)常幫助鄰居修電腦； 2．…（至少一點(diǎn)）
聰明	1．學(xué)東西快，努力學(xué)習(xí)各門學(xué)科； 2．野營(yíng)時(shí)甚至?xí)�搭建帳篷�?/TD>
勇敢	一個(gè)周日的早晨，他像往常一樣，坐在湖邊看書．突然聽(tīng)到一個(gè)女孩大聲呼救，他跳進(jìn)湖里，把小女孩從水里救了上來(lái)，并送她回家．
…	…（至少兩句）

Dear Sir/Madam，
I would like to recommend Daniel for this year's Young Star Award．
Daniel is a helpful boy．He often helps his neighbours fix computers．He always gives his seat to someone on the bus．
He is also clever．He learns things quickly．He works hard on all the subjects．He is even able to put up tents when we go camping．
He is brave，too．One Sunday morning，he sat by the lake and read books as usual．Suddenly，he heard a girl calling for help．He jumped into the lake and saved the girl from the water．At last，he sent her home．
All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Alice．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
He is even able to put up tents when we go camping．我們野營(yíng)時(shí)他甚至?xí)�搭建帳篷�?br />when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
He often takes part in all kinds of activities like collecting clothes and books for the children in need他總是參加各種活動(dòng)例如收集衣服和書給有需要的孩子．
in need作為后置定語(yǔ)，修飾children．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
I would like to recommend Daniel for this year's Young Star Award．
Daniel is a helpful boy．He often helps his neighbours fix computers．He always gives his seat to someone on the bus．（樂(lè)于助人）
He is also clever．He learns things quickly．He works hard on all the subjects．He is even able to put up tents when we go camping．【高分句型一】（聰明）
He is brave，too．One Sunday morning，he sat by the lake and read books as usual．Suddenly，he heard a girl calling for help．He jumped into the lake and saved the girl from the water．At last，he sent her home．（勇敢）
Daniel is polite and kind to others．He always says"hello"to his teachers．He thinks carefully when he works．He plans everything well．He often takes part in all kinds of activities like collecting clothes and books for the children in need．【高分句型二】（其他）
All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award．We look forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours faithfully，
Alice

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