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同學(xué)們進(jìn)入初二，身體和心理健康非常重要，這是父母和老師非常關(guān)心的問題，希望每個(gè)人都有一個(gè)健康的生活方式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示以Have a healthy lifestyle為題寫一篇短文。

1．簡述以下現(xiàn)象：

（1）健康之重要人盡皆知，請(qǐng)談2條優(yōu)點(diǎn)。

（2）許多青少年不注重健康問題，特別是假期。長時(shí)間看電視，通宵上網(wǎng)聊天、玩游戲。導(dǎo)致的危害如：影響視力，身體不好，不能和人友好相處。并寫出你在國慶節(jié)的做的不利于健康的活動(dòng)。

2．簡述你的看法，怎樣有一個(gè)健康的生活方式，提出你的2條建議。

要求：（1）內(nèi)容完整，層次清楚，語言流暢。

（2）詞數(shù)100左右，標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（特別是，especially)

Have a healthy lifestyle

As we all know, health is important.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Have a healthy lifestyle

As we all know, health is important. If we have good health, we will be full of energy, so we can do well in our study. But now many teenagers don’t care about it. They often watch TV for a long time. And they have a chat with friends or play computer games on the Internet all the whole night. This will affect their sight and bodies. If they continue to do it, they will not get along well with others.

During the national day, I play computer games until 11:00pm, so I can’t get enough sleep. It is bad for my health. So I think we should have a healthy lifestyle. We should go to bed early. Also, it’s very important to have enough exercise and eat healthy food.

In a word, having a healthy lifestyle is the most important to all.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，介紹健康生活方式的重要性。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：If we have...，we will ...， They often watch TV ...，they will not...，It is bad for...，it’s very important to.....等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意提綱中所要求內(nèi)容。

【寫作亮點(diǎn)】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了健康的重要性，接下來介紹我們青少年經(jīng)常不注重健康以及導(dǎo)致的危害，最后介紹自己對(duì)養(yǎng)成健康的生活習(xí)慣的建議。此處be full of, do well in, care about, on the Internet, get along with, be bad for等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。