Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)

Use the suggested questions as clues．Write at least 80 words on the topic “To Be a Lovely Yanchengness”．(根據(jù)建議回答的問(wèn)題，以“做一個(gè)可愛(ài)的鹽城人”為題寫(xiě)話(huà)。詞數(shù)不少于80個(gè)，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)：

Suggested questions：Why should we be lovely Yanchenese?

What should or shouldn’t a lovely Yanchenese do?

What are you doing to be a lovely Yanchenese?

To Be a Lovely Yanchenese

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　(For reference)

　　Yancheng is developing quickly．Every day thousands of tourists come to visit it, so we should act well to show that the city and its people are lovely．In order to be lovely Yanchenese, we should always be ready to help others．We shouldn’t speak loudly in public places or throw litter on the ground．I want to be a lovely Yanchenese．I am now studying hard and getting ready for the future．

　　書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則：

　　1．本題滿(mǎn)分為15分，按5個(gè)檔次給分；

　　2．評(píng)分時(shí)先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次．最后給分。

　　評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　1．(13－15分)合理避開(kāi)用生疏詞匯進(jìn)行分析，說(shuō)明合理，語(yǔ)言組織精密，結(jié)構(gòu)安排嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)淡或基本無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。

　　2．(10－12分)能夠?qū)λ�提供角度進(jìn)行分析，寫(xiě)出主要要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句較流暢，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

　　3．(7－9分)能夠?qū)υ?huà)題加以分析、說(shuō)明，但主要使用已學(xué)詞匯來(lái)說(shuō)明。寫(xiě)出基本要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)句基本流暢，有少量語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。

　　4．(4－6分)寫(xiě)出個(gè)別要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤多，只有個(gè)別句子可讀。

　　5．(0－3分)寫(xiě)出個(gè)別單詞或詞組。