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【題目】最近《朗讀者》、《中國詩詞大會》等文化類節(jié)目喚醒了中國人的閱讀情結。為了激發(fā)市民們閱讀興趣，廣州從4月份開始開展“書香羊城”活動。請根據(jù)以下的提示寫一篇短文，談談你對閱讀的看法，并對培養(yǎng)閱讀習慣和開展班級閱讀活動方面提出建議。

注意:1.詞數(shù)80詞左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)

2.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予給分

3.參考詞《朗讀者》----Readers

The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou ”is beginning held in Guangzhou from April,2017.

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Answer 1

【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” is being held in Guangzhou from April ,2017. Reading makes us a wise man. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness.

Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in reading after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class .

【解析】【亮點說明】這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如not only…but also，help sb. do sth.，every day，at least，after class，what’s more，try to do，in our class，for example，such as，set up，so that等。而It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness./ What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading / For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers.等多種復雜從句結構的運用和插入語的使用更是為文章增色不少。