Question

9．現(xiàn)在環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重，請你寫一封100詞左右的信呼吁人們保護(hù)環(huán)境，遵守規(guī)則．要點(diǎn)如下，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．保持周圍環(huán)境清潔，不要…，不要…；
2．在公共場所大聲談笑是粗魯無禮的，在圖書館…；
3．如果有人擋住你的路，可以說"勞駕"然后足夠有禮貌等他移動；
4．離開教室時關(guān)閉所有的燈，購物時…；
5．還應(yīng)解釋保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性；
6．發(fā)出倡議．（1-2句）
Dear all，
The environment around us is becoming worse and worse．We must do something to stop it．
                                                                          
Yours sincerely，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Next，it's rude and impolite to talk and laugh loudly in public places．
句中使用句型為：it is+形容詞+to do sth 做某事怎么樣．這句話意為：再者，在公共場所大聲說笑是非常粗魯和不禮貌的．
高分句型二：
We will live a green life if everyone takes action to protect the environment．
句中"if everyone takes action to protect the environment"為"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循"主將從現(xiàn)"原則．句中"take action"意為"采取行動"．這句話意為：如果每個人采取行動來保護(hù)環(huán)境，我們將會過上綠色生活．

解答 Dear all，
  The environment around us is becoming worse and worse．We must do something to stop it．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
  First，we shouldn't throw litter everywhere．Don't pick the flowers by the street．We must keep the environment around us clean and tidy．Next，it's rude and impolite to talk and laugh loudly in public places．【高分句型一】We must keep quiet in the library．If someone is in your way，you may say"Excuse me"and be polite enough to wait till he moves．Turn off all the lights when we leave the classroom．We had better take our own bags when shopping．Moreover，we should explain the importance of protecting the environment．（提出建議）
  We will live a green life if everyone takes action to protect the environment．【高分句型二】（發(fā)出倡議）
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely，

點(diǎn)評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．