Question

14．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇日記．

活動(dòng)時(shí)間	5月28日（星期六）
集合地點(diǎn)	學(xué)校大門(mén)口
出發(fā)時(shí)間	8：O0am．	到達(dá)時(shí)間	8：30am．
活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)	人民公園（the People'S Park）
交通工具	自行車(chē)
	上午做游戲
活動(dòng)內(nèi)容	中午野餐（picnic）
	下午拍照片；參觀動(dòng)物園
返回時(shí)間	5：O0pm．

注意：1．內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所提供的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名或校名）
2．詞數(shù)：80左右．（開(kāi)頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)）
Saturday，May，28th
It was fine．I went for an outing with my classmates today．
At 8：00，we met at the school gate and then set off for the People's Park．The bicycle ride took us half an hour．
The sun was shining and there were many people in the park．In the morning，we played all kinds of games．After the picnic at noon，we took many pictures in the afternoon．Before we went back at 5：00，we spent about one hour visiting the zoo．Although I'm a little tired，I felt very happy．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文，通過(guò)寫(xiě)信的方式寫(xiě)一篇游記，因而在寫(xiě)作中需要注意時(shí)間順序，可用到表示時(shí)間的詞at the beginning，before，after，and then…，for about…h(huán)our（s）．
內(nèi)容為根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇日記．時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．活動(dòng)集合的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、目的地、交通工具及花費(fèi)的時(shí)間；2．活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容：上午做游戲、中午野餐、下午拍照、參觀動(dòng)物園及返回的時(shí)間．3．對(duì)本次活動(dòng)的感想．
常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：
set off 出發(fā)
arrive at…到達(dá)…
at noon 在正午
spend…doing…花費(fèi)…做某事
參考句子：
It took us half an hour to go there by bike．騎自行車(chē)到那里花費(fèi)了我們半個(gè)小時(shí)的時(shí)間．
We played different kinds of games．我們玩了不同種類(lèi)的游戲．
We spent about one hour visiting the zoo．我們花了將近一個(gè)小時(shí)逛動(dòng)物園．
Although I'm a little tired，I felt very happy．雖然很累，但很開(kāi)心．

解答 Saturday，May，28th
     It was fine．I went for an outing with my classmates today．【寫(xiě)作原因】
     At 8：00，we met at the school gate and then set off for the People's Park．The bicycle ride took us half an hour．
     The sun was shining and there were many people in the park．In the morning，we played
all kinds of games．After the picnic at noon，we took many pictures in the afternoon．Before we went back at 5：00，we spent about one hour visiting the zoo．【活動(dòng)】
     Although I'm a little tired，I felt very happy．【感想】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇所給材料比較詳細(xì)的圖表類(lèi)作文，我們要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，可有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系．