Question

5．仔細(xì)觀察圖中乘客在公交車上的舉止，參考所提供的短語寫一篇短文．
talk loudly on the phone，smoke on the bus，drop litter，stand close to each other，be not allowed，feel uncomfortable，It is better to…，social behavior，…

提示：
1．短文內(nèi)容包括對圖中乘客在公交車上的舉止描述和你的建議四條．
2．詞數(shù)80個左右．短文開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和個人的相關(guān)信息．
Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a No.56bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝蓋）istalking on the phone louldly，a tall man is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she dropped a lot of litter．I think everyone should obey the bus regulations，it is not allowed to smoke on the bus．Itisbetternot totalkloudly，or others will feeluncomfortable．We should not droplitter on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social behavior．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  I think everyone  should obey the bus regulations．我認(rèn)為每個人都應(yīng)該遵守公車管理規(guī)定．I think是主句，后面的是賓語從句．
高分句型二
it is not allowed to smoke on the bus．在公共汽車上是不允許抽煙的．it is not allowed to do sth．不允許做某事．

解答 Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a No.56 bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝蓋）is talking on the phone louldly，a tall man is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she dropped a lot of litter．【要點一，對圖中乘客在公交車上的舉止描述】I think everyone  should obey the bus regulations【高分句型一，注意賓語從句的使用】，it is not allowed to smoke on the bus【高分句型二，注意固定句型的使用】．It is better not to  talk loudly，or others will feel uncomfortable．We should not drop litter on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social behavior．【要點二，建議】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．