Question

3．目前，我們的孩子面臨著許多未知的危險(xiǎn)．這些危險(xiǎn)讓我們的父母很擔(dān)心．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給某英文報(bào)寫一篇短文，就青少年的安全問題談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh．

狀況	1．校車事故多次發(fā)生，許多孩子喪生． 2．市場(chǎng)上到處可見不安全的食品，危害孩子的健康． 3．網(wǎng)上不健康的網(wǎng)站，對(duì)青少年有不良影響． 4．…（自己所見的不安全現(xiàn)象）
建議	1．制定新的校車規(guī)則來保證孩子的安全2．… 3．…（  至少寫出兩個(gè)建議  ）

寫作要求：
1．句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．
2．詞數(shù)90個(gè)詞左右，文章開頭部分己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．不要逐字翻譯，省略處需適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
提示詞：unsafe adj．不安全的
Nowadays，many parents often worry about their children because of the safety problems．                 
If we can do that all，the children in our country will be safer．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
The unsafe food on the market can be seen everywhere．市場(chǎng)上的不安全食品四處可見．
情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)：情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be+過去分詞
【高分句型二】
①What's more，the bad websites on the Internet ②have a bad effect on the children．再者，網(wǎng)上不健康的網(wǎng)頁(yè)對(duì)孩子有壞影響
①what's more 再者
②have an effort on  對(duì)…有影響
【高分句型三】
①In order to protect the children，we should make new rules②to protect the safety of the children．為了保護(hù)孩子，我們應(yīng)該制定新規(guī)去保護(hù)孩子的安全．
①in order to 為了…作目的狀語(yǔ)
②動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．

解答 Nowadays，many parents often worry about their children because of the safety problems．For example，the school bus accidents have taken place many times．Many children were killed．The unsafe food on the market can be seen everywhere．【高分句型一】It is harmful to the children's health．What's more，the bad websites on the Internet have a bad effort on the children．【高分句型二】After class，some  students run after each other in the hallway．That might hurt themselves and other students（安全現(xiàn)狀）
 In order to protect the children，we should make new rules to protect the safety of the children．【高分句型三】
 Don't allow anyone to produce any unsafe food．We mustn't sell or buy such unsafe food，and we should stay away from the bad websites．（我的建議）
If we can do these all，the children will be safer．（總結(jié)全文）

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