Question

根據(jù)以下提示，以My friend and DIY為主題，用英語寫一篇短文。

提示：1）我的朋友John是DIY俱樂部的成員；癡迷于自己動手；

????? 2）他家里有很多不同種類的工具，例如：剪刀、膠水、刷子；

????? 3）他喜歡修東西和……；

????? 4）去年圣誕，裝飾了圣誕樹，為朋友做賀卡；

????? 5）他認為DIY很有趣。建議我去參加DIY的課程，……

要求：1）短文應(yīng)包括所給所有信息， 并適當發(fā)揮。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

my friend John is a member of the DIY club。he is willing to do anything by himself.In his home, there are many different kinds of tools, such as scissors, glue and a brush and so on. besides, he likes repairing all kinds of things.He often help his parents with some machines.

last Christmas, he helped decoratethe Christmas tree and made some Christmas cards for his friends.They all liked them very much. he thinks the DIY is very interesting. And he advises me to go to the DIY course. If so ,my life will be filled with pleasure.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求以第三人稱的方式敘述朋友約翰。主要用到兩種時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時態(tài)。所給內(nèi)容已經(jīng)很是詳細，只要注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)正確，文章調(diào)理連貫就可以了。

【亮點說明】這篇短文在句式上靈活變化，在用詞上也不斷變化以避免重復(fù)，如such as，besides, last Christmas, If so等。在平時的練習中要注意積累。

考點：話題作文。