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初級寫作  (本題一節(jié)，計(jì)15分）你們班的交流生Mary 來自英國。本周六她要在家舉辦生日聚會(huì)，邀請你去參加。 請你根據(jù)邀請函和提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮， 寫一篇80詞左右的信婉言拒絕她的邀請。

Birthday Party! Please come to my 13th birthday party.          Saturday, October 24th, 5:00 p.m. My house, No. 25, West Street.                                  Mary

提示： 1. 上午參加英語競賽；2. 下午去足球俱樂部；3. 晚上去看電影。

Dear Mary, Thank you for your invitation.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 I wish you a happy birthday. Mike

Answer 1

 

Dear Mary, Thank you for your invitation. I’d really love to,but I’m afaid I couldn’t. I won’t be free that day. First,I will take part in the English contest in the morning. Then ,I will go to the Football Club  in the afternoon. Finally, I will go to the cinema with my aunt  in the evening. She just came back from New York a few days ago. And she will leave for New York the day after tomorrow. I wish you a happy birthday. Mike

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者主要寫信拒絕邀請，主要用一般將來時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如take part in,in the morning,in the afternoon,in the evening,go to the cinema,came back from,a few days ago,leave for ,the day after tomorrow等短語，委婉語氣 I’d really love to,but I’m afaid I couldn’t.還用到first，then ，finally。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。