Question

16．假設(shè)今天輪到你在英語課上作一個(gè)英語報(bào)告，主題是An accident．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息寫一份報(bào)告．

Time	1月20日早上7：30
Weather conditions	又冷又有風(fēng)
Accident	紅燈亮?xí)r，一個(gè)騎著摩托車的男子試圖穿過馬路，撞上了一輛校車
Conditions of the victim	男子傷了左腿，不能動(dòng)彈
Action	校車司機(jī)：	匆忙下車    …
	警察：	很快趕到，把男子送去醫(yī)院
Feelings	人人應(yīng)該遵守規(guī)則 …

要求：
1 詞數(shù)：不少于70詞．
2 要點(diǎn)齊全，意思連貫，語句通順．
3 …部分請(qǐng)發(fā)揮合理想象，自擬不少于1個(gè)要點(diǎn)．
參考詞匯：摩托車motorbike；遵守規(guī)則：obey the rules
Dear everyone，
Today I'd like to tell you something about an accident．It happened at about 7：30 on the morning of January 20．A man rode his motorbike and tried to cross the stree t when the traffic lights were red．Then the motorbike crashed into a school bus．The man hurt his left leg and couldn't move．The school driver got off the bus and called 110 in a hurry．The policemen arrived quickly and sent the man to hospital．
I think safety is the most important．Everyone should obey the traffic rules．We can cross the street only when the traffic lights are green．When we cross the street，we must be very careful．
I think everyone should obey the rules．
Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
A man rode his motorbike and tried to cross the street when the traffic lights were red紅燈的時(shí)候一個(gè)男人騎摩托車試圖過馬路．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
I think safety is the most important我認(rèn)為安全是最重要的．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．

解答 Dear everyone，
Today I'd like to tell you something about a traffic accident．It happened at about 7：30 on the morning of January 20．It's cold and windy．（時(shí)間天氣）A man rode his motorbike and tried to cross the street when the traffic lights were red．【高分句型一】Then the motorbike crashed into a school bus．（事故）The man hurt his left leg and couldn't move．（傷者）The school driver got off the bus and called 110 in a hurry．The policemen arrived quickly and sent the man to hospital．（行動(dòng)）
I think safety is the most important．【高分句型二】Everyone should obey the traffic rules．We can cross the street only when the traffic lights are green．When we cross the street，we must be very careful．（感受）
I think everyone should obey the rules．
Thanks for listening!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱類作文的要點(diǎn)都給了出來，在寫作的時(shí)候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成一個(gè)整體．同時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)．