Question

【題目】寫作。

根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容要點寫一篇短文介紹馬克·吐溫。

1.美國著名作家，寫了許多著名的小說；

2.1835年出生于佛羅里達的鄉(xiāng)村，4歲時全家搬到城里，12歲時父親去世；

3.從童年開始工作，做過不同的工作，他最著名的小說之一是《湯姆·索亞歷險記》

4.他寫作的才能并非從小就有，而是來自于他個人的經(jīng)歷。

參考詞匯： 小說novel 童年childhood 個人personal 佛羅里達Florida

湯姆·索亞歷險記 The Adventure of Tom Sawyer

Mark Twain

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Answer 1

【答案】

Mark Twain, one of the best known American writers wrote a lot of famous novels in his life. In 1835, he was born in a village in Florida. His family moved to the city when he was 4, at the age of 12, his father died.

Mark Twin has been working since his childhood, and he has done many different jobs. One of his most famous novels is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. His ability to write is not from an early age, but from his personal experience.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇短文介紹馬克·吐溫。短文要包含所有提示內(nèi)容，要做到語句通順，意思連貫，主旨健康，中心突出。時態(tài)以一般過去時態(tài)為主，人稱為第三人稱。

寫作亮點：本文包含了所有內(nèi)容要點，文章開篇點題, 特別是一些連詞的運用，使語句更加通順，連貫。時態(tài)運用非常準確，且做到了主謂一致，無語法錯誤。結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹。His ability to write is not from an early age, but from his personal experience.使文章很有說服力，闡明了自己的觀點。