Question

根據(jù)所提供的信息，寫一篇關(guān)于你的朋友的英語短文。（開頭已給出）
要求： 1．字?jǐn)?shù)60字左右。
2．內(nèi)容全面，表達(dá)完整流暢，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
3.文中不出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名稱等信息。否則不得分。

Answer 1

I have a good friend,Jenny Smith. She is 13 years old and her birthday is October 28^th. There are four family members in her family, her parents ,a dog and she. She is fond of blue and green,but dislikes yellow. She likes chicken and ice-cream,but dislikes eggs. She is crazy about tennis,but dislike soccer. On Monday morning she is busy. from 8:00 to 12:00, she has science class,English class,math class and a basketbal game. She is interested in science , English and the basketball game ,but hates math. At twelve ,she has lunch.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文主要介紹好朋友的年齡、生日和喜惡。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如用 be fond of,be interested in,be crazy about等短語來表達(dá)喜歡，避免like重復(fù)使用；多次使用并列句如She is fond of blue and green,but dislikes yellow. She likes chicken and ice-cream,but dislikes eggs. She is crazy about tennis,but dislike soccer.，使文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。