Question

【題目】七、書(shū)面表達(dá)(共1題:滿(mǎn)分20分)

寫(xiě)作要求:

1.仔細(xì)觀察上面的兩幅圖片，然后用英語(yǔ)描述圖片內(nèi)容。

2.你贊同上述圖片中的哪一種教育方式，為什么?

3.談?wù)勀愕母改钙綍r(shí)是怎樣教育你的。

注意:1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

From the pictures above, we can see that

Answer 1

【答案】From the pictures above, we can see that different parents give their different opinions about the same thing.When parents see a cleaner in the street,some of them told their children not to do some cleaning like him.So they say to their children"If you don’t study hard,you will end up like him" .However,other parents say to their children,"If you study well,you will be able to make a better world for him".

I think the latter is better for children because the words can encourage children to work harder.My parents, care about my education more than anything else. They could do everything for me.They spend most of their spare time coaching their children in studies.It seems as if a better education is all that parents expect for children.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，描述圖片內(nèi)容，談?wù)勀愀改钙綍r(shí)是怎樣教育你的。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we can see that……，If you don’t…….，I think…….，They could…….，.It seems as if……，等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。