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請(qǐng)根據(jù)申請(qǐng)表內(nèi)容完成90詞左右的申請(qǐng)信

Name	Zhao Yang	Date of birth	2000年10月20日
Tele. number	0519—82835988	Email	8344506@qq.com
School	No.6 Middle School	Grade	8
Favourite subjects	生物、英語(yǔ)	Interests and hobbies	收集各種動(dòng)物圖片、聽(tīng)音樂(lè)
reasons	喜愛(ài)大自然，對(duì)植物動(dòng)物感興趣， 想要更多的了解鳥(niǎo)，人們砍伐樹(shù)，鳥(niǎo)越來(lái)越少，想做些事情來(lái)保護(hù)鳥(niǎo)
Free time	每周日全天

Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yang

Answer 1

Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join the Birdwatching Society.
First, let me introduce myself. I am a Grade 8 at No.6 Middle School. My favorite subject is Biology and English. I am interested in collecting the pictures of different animals and listening to music.
Last spring, I went to Zhalong Nature Reserve and took part in activities to protect birds with my friends, I enjoy the natural world, and I’m interested in learning different kinds of plants and animals. I want to know more about the birds.
Some people want to cut down trees. As a result, the number of the birds is becoming smaller and smaller. I think it’s important for me to do something to protect them. I can take part in activities all day every Saturday.
I will be very happy if I can be a member of the Birdwatching Society. You can call me on 0519-82835988 or email me at 8344506@qq.com.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Yang

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者先寫(xiě)自己的個(gè)人情況，包括所在學(xué)校、星座、性格、愛(ài)好，然后寫(xiě)自己的煩惱，最后請(qǐng)求幫助。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如be interested in, listen to， take part in, different kinds of ， cut down， as a result， smaller and smaller.， all day，call me on ，email me at 等短語(yǔ)，文中還用到了條件狀語(yǔ)從句 if I can be a member of the Birdwatching Society.賓語(yǔ)從句 I think it’s important for me to do something to protect them. 文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。