Question

某市今年舉辦主題為“把希望帶給貧困孩子”的活動(dòng)。現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義寫一份倡議書，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下（括號(hào)中的詞匯可供參考）：
許多貧困家庭無(wú)力負(fù)擔(dān)孩子去上學(xué)；(afford)
孩子們沒有足夠的錢去買學(xué)習(xí)用品和衣物；(school things and clothes)
每個(gè)孩子都應(yīng)該有上學(xué)的權(quán)力；(have the right to do something)
我們應(yīng)該盡最大的努力去幫助他們，比如……; (try one’s best to do something)
讓我們一起給貧困孩子創(chuàng)造一個(gè)更美好的未來(lái)。(work together)
注意：
文章開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
詞數(shù)80左右。
Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school.
Thanks for your joining!
Students’ Union

Answer 1

Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. Because their family can’t afford to send them to school. At the same time, children don’t have enough money to buy school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for them. So we should try our best to do something to help them, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We believe if we work together, we can make a better future for them.

試題分析：這是一篇該材料作文，寫一封倡議書。本題所給材料較為詳細(xì),我們所要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái).寫作中應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，注意將所給材料表達(dá)清楚,注意應(yīng)用所給短語(yǔ),句式.結(jié)合語(yǔ)境可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意主謂一致問題.為了讓表達(dá)更符合邏輯，可以適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。