Question

8．根據(jù)提示，寫一篇短文介紹張華的變化．詞數(shù)60 左右．
提示：張華，一個(gè)九年級學(xué)生．家庭富裕（rich）．過去零花錢常�；ㄔ诖螂娔X游戲上．現(xiàn)在，他努力學(xué)習(xí)，將零花錢大部分捐給UNICEF．他覺得幫助別人會(huì)使他自己快樂．
Zhang Hua is a Grade 9 student of Sunshine Secondary School．His family is rich．He used to spend most of his pocket money buying snacks and playing computer games．He didn't work so hard at school．
Last summer，he went to a poor village．There he saw many poor children who weren't able to go to school because their families were too poor．
That experience affected Zhang Hua a lot．Now Zhang Hua works very hard at school and he donates most of his pocket money to UNICEF and he takes an active part in many charity activities to help people in need．He thinks it important to help people in need．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
There he saw many poor children who weren't able to go to school because their families were too poor．
句中"who weren't able to go to school"為定語從句，修飾"poor children"，"because their families were too poor"為"because"引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，"be able to do sth"意為"有能力做某事"．這句話意為：在那兒他看到很多因?yàn)榧依锾�窮而不能去上學(xué)的貧困兒童．
高分句型二：
He thinks it important to help people in need．
句子結(jié)構(gòu)為"think it+形容詞+to do sth 認(rèn)為．．怎么樣"，其中"it"為形式賓語，代指"to help people"．"in need"意為"在困難中的"．這句話意為：他認(rèn)為幫助處于困境的人們很重要．

解答 Zhang Hua is a Grade 9 student of Sunshine Secondary School．His family is rich．He used to spend most of his pocket money buying snacks and playing computer games．He didn't work so hard at school．（過去的張華）
     Last summer，he went to a poor village．There he saw many poor children who weren't able to go to school because their families were too poor．【高分句型一】（改變的原因）
     That experience affected Zhang Hua a lot．Now Zhang Hua works very hard at school and he donates most of his pocket money to UNICEF and he takes an active part in many charity activities to help people in need．He thinks it important to help people in need．【高分句型二】（現(xiàn)在的張華）

點(diǎn)評 寫作文時(shí)要注意平時(shí)語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤，寫作時(shí)注意條理清楚，語意通暢．