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【題目】（甘肅省蘭州市2015年中考）書面表達(dá)

同學(xué)們，在剛才的閱讀中我們了解到一些有關(guān)西方飲食文化的有趣知識(shí)。現(xiàn)在某國(guó)外旅游雜志向你約稿，請(qǐng)你以 When in China, do as the Chinese do!為題寫一篇文章，向西方讀者介紹我們中國(guó)的飲食文化。以下是此雜志社發(fā)來(lái)的稿件要求，請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀，完成寫作。

要求：內(nèi)容合理；要點(diǎn)齊全；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。

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Answer 1

【答案】

When in China, do as the Chinese do!

Meals in China are different in some ways from meals in the West. In China, lunch is usually served around 12 o’clock. As for dinner, Chinese people eat it much earlier than people in the West. Chopsticks are used to eat most food. Generally, for dinner, there’ll be lots of different dishes, not just three courses. Besides, Chinese people like to talk about food, so it’s a good topic during a meal. The golden rule is: when you’re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求按所給提綱，給雜志社寫一篇文章介紹中國(guó)的飲食文化，要仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)：中國(guó)人的飲食與西方人一樣嗎？中國(guó)什么時(shí)間吃午餐、晚餐？怎樣吃食物？和老人一樣怎樣禮貌飲食？在中國(guó)怎樣才知道這一餐吃結(jié)束了？吃飯時(shí)可以說(shuō)話嗎？等等。要依據(jù)提示問題或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫。要注意到：內(nèi)容合理；要點(diǎn)齊全；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本范文按提綱要求，介紹了中國(guó)人的飲食文化，內(nèi)容合理；要點(diǎn)齊全；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確、連貫。文章準(zhǔn)確合理地運(yùn)用了主動(dòng)、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)形式，比如：lunch is usually served…（被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)）；Chinese people eat it…（主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)）；Chopsticks are used to eat…（被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)）；短文中許多短語(yǔ)也運(yùn)用得很恰當(dāng)，比如：different from; in some ways; as for等等。