Question

目前中學(xué)生早餐問(wèn)題已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)關(guān)注，你所在學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)在5月20日“全國(guó)學(xué)生營(yíng)養(yǎng)日”開(kāi)展問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，其結(jié)果令人擔(dān)憂(yōu)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果寫(xiě)一篇短文，倡導(dǎo)營(yíng)養(yǎng)早餐。(regularly, active, junk food(垃圾食品), a balanced diet, as a result)

學(xué)生比例	早餐情況	健康狀況
55%	有規(guī)律地吃早餐	身體健康，精力充沛
25%	吃垃圾食品	營(yíng)養(yǎng)不均衡
20%	沒(méi)有吃早餐	感到饑餓，上課無(wú)法認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，容易生病

Breakfast Is Important

Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its importance. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students                                                      

                                                                                 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Breakfast Is Important

Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its importance. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day. They keep healthy and look active. 25 percent of them just have junk food instead. They don’t have a balanced diet. It is bad for their health. 20 percent (of the students) go to school without breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and can’t listen to teachers carefully. What’s worse, they get ill easily.

It’s necessary/important (for us) to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是圍繞早餐問(wèn)題展開(kāi)敘述，首先應(yīng)該說(shuō)明吃早飯的重要性，然后，指出一些不健康的飲食習(xí)慣。最后，要發(fā)出倡議，號(hào)召大家堅(jiān)持吃早飯。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，本文的主語(yǔ)可以用第二人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。

考點(diǎn)：有關(guān)早飯問(wèn)題的議論文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本書(shū)面表達(dá)的中心是吃早飯的重要性，所以應(yīng)該圍繞題目的提示進(jìn)行書(shū)寫(xiě)。應(yīng)該注意表述的邏輯性和條理性。盡量用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表述。