Question

假設(shè)你是Lin Tao.根據(jù)下列表格寫一篇介紹自己的短文。(不少于六個(gè)句子) （7分）

Name: Lin Tao

Age:13

Class:4

Grade:7

From: China

Tel: (010)79860980

Look: black eyes, a small mouth

                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     

Answer 1

One possible version：
I am Lin Tao. I’m thirteen years old. I come from China. I’m a student. I am in Class 4,Grade 7. I have black eyes and a small mouth. And my telephone number is (010)79860980.

試題分析：本文是材料作文，考生在寫作之前必須認(rèn)真審題，把握寫作要求和寫作目的。本文要求寫一篇短文，介紹自己。應(yīng)該用第一人稱做主語。時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作前寫出有關(guān)的短語和固定表達(dá)備用。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫運(yùn)用正確。還恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了be動(dòng)詞的用法和一些短語，如come from ; telephone number等等。