Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

樹木對(duì)我們很重要，離開了樹木我們就無(wú)法生存。有了樹木我們可以乘涼，我們可以從它們那里得到果實(shí)。它們的綠葉對(duì)我們也很有用。而有些人砍伐樹木來(lái)制作紙張、木料，破壞了我們的生存環(huán)境。我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)樹木。

請(qǐng)你用詩(shī)歌的形式來(lái)說(shuō)明樹木的重要性。

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Answer 1

【答案】Trees

We need the trees for shelter，

We need the trees to feed us，

We need a place to stay，

We need them to survive.

Somewhere to raise our children，

They have the fruits and leaves.

Somewhere to hide away，

We need to stay alive.

You want the trees for paper，

You want the trees for timber，

You want the trees every day.

You want wood to build.

You use it just a little.

But logging is the reason.

And then throw it all away.

Many of the trees are killed.

【解析】試題本篇書面表達(dá)以詩(shī)歌的形式表達(dá)“樹木的重要性”，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，闡述樹木對(duì)人們生活帶來(lái)的好處。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用和詩(shī)歌語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn)。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練, 時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確。文中need sth. to do, and, but, hide away， stay alive，a little，throw it all away.等詞(組)的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密, 語(yǔ)言流暢，要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容豐富，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。