Question

2．Recently there has been a discussion about the topic"Water Is Precious"in your class．
Please write at Host 60words about the topic"Water Is Precious"to express your point of
view，（請(qǐng)以"水是珍貴的"寫(xiě)一篇至少60詞的作文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
（你的作文內(nèi)容須包含以下幾點(diǎn)）
1）Why is water very important in our life？
2）What are the causes of the water shortage？
3）How can we protect our precious water resources？
As we all know，water is one of the most important resources in our life because we not only drink and wash with it，but use it in agricultural and industrial production as well．However，despite large amounts of water on the earth，only less than 3% can be used by humans，which is not enough for everyone at all．So we must save it．First of all，use water twice or more．For example，we can use water after cleaning the rice to water the plants．It includes a lot of nutrition for them．Secondly，we should turn off the tap when we don't use it．Last but not least，we shouldn't pour the sewage into the lake，for it may dirty the lake．In all，let's take actions to protect precious water!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"Water Is Precious"為主題談?wù)勊�的重要性和怎樣保護(hù)水資源．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1為什么水在我們生活中很重要？
2引起水資源缺少的原因？
3我們?cè)鯓幽鼙Ｗo(hù)我們珍貴的水資源？

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
not only，but…as well 不僅…而且…
less than 少于
not…at all 一點(diǎn)也不
turn off 關(guān)掉
last but not least最后也是最重要的
in all 總之
【高分句型】
1．①However，②despite large amounts of water on the earth，only③less than 3% ④can be used by humans，⑤which is⑥not enough for everyone at all
①however表轉(zhuǎn)折，然而．
②despite介詞，盡管．
③less than 少于
④情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是water是動(dòng)詞use的承受者，故用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，突出主語(yǔ)．
⑤which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾前面的整個(gè)句子．
⑥not…at all 一點(diǎn)也不
2．①Last but not least，we shouldn't②pour the sewage into the lake，③for it may④dirty the lake．
①last but not least最后也是最重要的
②pour…into把…倒入…
③for表示因?yàn)�，引�?dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
④dirty作為動(dòng)詞，表示把…弄臟

解答 As we all know，water is one of the most important resources in our life because we not only drink and wash with it，but use it in agricultural and industrial production as well（為什么水在我們生活中很重要）．However，despite large amounts of water on the earth，only less than 3% can be used by humans，which is not enough for everyone at all．（引起水資源缺少的原因？）【高分句型】So we must save it．First of all，use water twice or more．For example，we can use water after cleaning the rice to water the plants．It includes a lot of nutrition for them．Secondly，we should turn off the tap when we don't use it．Last but not least，we shouldn't pour the sewage into the lake，for it may dirty the lake．【高分句型】（怎樣能保護(hù)我們珍貴的水資源）In all，let's take actions to protect precious water!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述．語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．