Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是Mei Ling，是光明中學(xué)七年級學(xué)生，想與Xiao Xin結(jié)為朋友。請閱讀Xiao Xin的e-mail，并根據(jù)下面思維導(dǎo)圖提供的信息，給Xiao Xin回封電子郵件。
Hi dear,
My name is Xiao Xin. I'm thirteen. I'm a student from Wuhan NO.1 Middle School. I like P.E. because our school has a nice and good playground(運(yùn)動場). I can play soccer there. Also, I like science, it's very interesting. So it is my favorite subject. Oh, November 20th is my birthday. What ab out yours? Let's be friends. Is that OK with you?
Best wishes!
XiaoXin

要求：（1）回信中必須包含思維導(dǎo)圖中所提供的內(nèi)容，并就相關(guān)內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮但不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個人信息(人名、地名、學(xué)校名等)；（2）詞數(shù)60左右(開頭句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Hi Xiao Xin,
Thank you for your e-mail. ……
See you soon.
Mei Ling

Answer 1

【答案】Hi Xiao Xin,
Thank you for your e-mail. I'm happy to be your friend. My name is Mei Ling. I'm twelve years old. My birthday is July 3rd. I'm a student from Guangming Middle School. My favorite subject is English because it's very interesting and our English class is fun. I often read English books. Also I like sports, I often play soccer with my friends after class. I have a good eating habit. I like vegetables and fruits, but I don't like hamburgers because it's not good for my health.
See you soon.
Mei Ling
【解析】這是一封書信，Mei Ling回信給Xiao Xin告訴他自己的個人情況。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié) 構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I'm...,My favorite subject is..., I have...,I like..., but I don't like... 等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意提綱中所要求的內(nèi)容，完整地表達(dá)出來。
【點(diǎn) 評】提綱作文。本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了Mei Ling高興和Xiao Xin朋友，接下來介紹Mei Ling介紹自己的情況：年齡、年齡、生日、學(xué)校、喜歡的科目、喜歡的運(yùn)動以及飲食情況，最后指出期望早日見到 Xiao Xin.此處thank you for sth, play sports, have a good eating habits, be good for等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。