Question

【題目】下表是你和你最好朋友Tom的信息，請(qǐng)以"My best friend"為題寫一篇文章介紹你的好朋友。要求: 1. 表格中所有信息必須使用，表中省略的信息自己可以補(bǔ)充拓展。
2. 突出主題，詳略得當(dāng)。
3. 不少于80個(gè)單詞。

姓名	相同(似)之處	不同之處
Tom	1). 個(gè)頭一樣高。 2). 愛運(yùn)動(dòng)，每周鍛煉兩三次。 3). 都很友好，樂于助人。 4). 周末常去遺愛湖……	1). 你朋友文靜,而你…… 2). 你喜歡肥皂劇，而你朋友喜歡…… 3). 你朋友飲食習(xí)慣健康，而你…… 4). 你朋友比你學(xué)習(xí)刻苦。

Answer 1

【答案】My best friend

Tom is my best friend. Let me tell you something about us.

We have some in common. Tom is as tall as me. We both like doing sports, and we often exercise together twice or three times a week. We are friendly to everyone. We think it's fun to help others.

On weekends, we usually walk to Yi'ai Lake Park. The air there is the freshest in the city. We can enjoy our time quietly by taking a walk there.

However, we don't think it's necessary to be the same in everything. So there are also some differences between us. I'm funnier and more outgoing than Tom. He's quiet. I like soap operas. I think they are relaxing to watch. But Tom likes watching news. He has healthy eating habits but I don't. At school Tom is more hardworking than me, so he always gets higher grades.

【解析】本文屬于提綱類短文，話題是"My best friend"。這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，應(yīng)用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯如have …in common、 as tall as,、be friendly to、 we don't think it's necessary to be the same in everything.中的it's necessary to be the same in everything.是賓語從句，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫。