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11．昨天是端午節(jié)，學(xué)校組織我班同學(xué)去幸福養(yǎng)老院慰問老人，給老人送溫暖，請你給�？瘜懫�文章，記敘當(dāng)天的活動．
主要內(nèi)容：
1．上午與老人們一起談笑風(fēng)聲的包粽子．
2．下午給老人們表演節(jié)目并與他們談心．
3．談?wù)勀銓Υ舜位顒拥母邢耄?br />要求：
1．按所給提示可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，無需標(biāo)題．
2．詞數(shù)：80-100
參考詞匯：端午節(jié)Dragon Boat Festival  粽子zongzi  養(yǎng)老院nursing houses．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I think it necessary for us to learn how to respect and take care of others，especially the old．
句子結(jié)構(gòu)為"think it+形容詞+for sb to do sth"，其中"it"為形式賓語，代指后面的不定式短語．句中短語有"take care of sb 照顧某人"．這句話意為：我認(rèn)為對我們來說學(xué)習(xí)怎么尊敬和照顧他人，特別是老年人，很必要．
高分句型二：
On the other hand，if everyone shows the love to others，the world will become more peaceful and warmer．
句中"if everyone shows the love to others"為"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循"主將從現(xiàn)"原則．句中短語有"on the other hand 另一方面"．這句話意為：另一方面，如果每個人都對他人獻(xiàn)出自己的愛，世界將會變得更安寧、更溫暖．

解答 Yesterday was the Dragon Boat Festival，we went to Happiness Nursing House to help the old people．I had a happy day．（開篇點題）
When we arrived，we were warmly welcomed by the old people．First we introduced ourselves．Then we were packing Zongzi together with the old，talking and laughing．After lunch，we performed and sang songs with them happily．Finally all the old people said goodbye to us at the gate．（當(dāng)天的活動）
At the end of the day，we were very happy because we did a good deed．I think it necessary for us to learn how to respect and take care of others，especially the old．【高分句型一】It is also a traditional virtue to help the old．On the other hand，if everyone shows the love to others，the world will become more peaceful and warmer．【高分句型二】（我的感受）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．