Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)不久前你們學(xué)校為貧困地區(qū)的孩子們籌款舉辦了一次慈善行活動(dòng)。請以“Walk for children in poor areas”為題，為某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 目的：為貧困地區(qū)的孩子們籌款

2. 時(shí)間：10月23日，星期六

3. 路徑： 學(xué)校——市中心

4. 簡況：學(xué)生把自己分成四人一組，出發(fā)前計(jì)劃好了一切，步行很艱辛，但活動(dòng)過程中大家互相幫助，互相支持。最終在許多人的幫助下，籌的善款5萬多元。

5. 感受：每個(gè)人都很累，但都很高興，因?yàn)?/span>….

注意：1. 報(bào)道必須把包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；

2. 第5要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用至少2句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

Walk for children in poor areas

Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.__________

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Answer 1

【答案】It was on Saturday, 23rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end. We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it wasan excellent chance to learn team spirit.

【解析】

本篇文章屬于報(bào)道類，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過去式為主。

重點(diǎn)詞匯：

（1）walk from …… to……從……步行到……；（2）With the help of many people在許多人的幫助下； （3）over (more than)超過；（4）in the end在最后；（5）raise money籌款。

重點(diǎn)句型：

Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. 步行之前，我們把自己分成四組，并計(jì)劃好一切。Group……into….把……劃分……。

Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit. 因?yàn)檫@是一次有意義的經(jīng)歷，也是學(xué)習(xí)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神的好機(jī)會(huì)。a meaningful experience一次有意義的經(jīng)歷；an excellent chance極好的機(jī)會(huì)。