Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇60詞左右的人物介紹。

姓名	王林
年齡	13歲
居住地	江蘇南京
長(zhǎng)相	短發(fā)，個(gè)子很高，戴眼鏡
品格	友好，樂于助人，學(xué)習(xí)勤奮
所在學(xué)校	陽光中學(xué)
愛好	游泳，玩電腦游戲，經(jīng)常在周末和同學(xué)一起踢足球， 梅西(Messi)是他最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)員和偶像
理想	當(dāng)一名足球運(yùn)動(dòng)員

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Answer 1

【答案】This is Wang Lin. He is my good friend. He is thirteen, and he comes from Nanjing.

Wang Lin is tall. He has short hair with a pair of glasses. He studies at Sunshine Middle School. He works hard. He is nice and willing to help others.

Wang Lin likes swimming and playing computer games. He also likes football. He often plays football with his classmates at weekends. Mess is his favourite player and hero. He wants to be a football player in the future.

【解析】這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹我的朋友王明。主要介紹他的年齡，居住地，長(zhǎng)相，品格，愛好，理想等。人稱為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，表格中所給的內(nèi)容十分的詳細(xì)。在寫作中注意主謂一致，句子條理通順就可以了。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，注意到了第三人稱單數(shù)的應(yīng)用。同時(shí)能使用一些短語，如a tall boy with short hair.，is willing to，is good at等。