Question

以“My Dream Home”為題來(lái)談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想家園，80個(gè)單詞左右。

我的夢(mèng)想家園在山腳下。有兩層，房前有一個(gè)大花園，種滿(mǎn)了花。

一樓有一個(gè)廚房和家庭影院，因?yàn)槲蚁矚g…

我的父母住在二樓，我有自己的臥室，我可以…

我最喜歡的地方是……因?yàn)?/span>……

我愛(ài)我的夢(mèng)想家園。

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Answer 1

My dream home is at the foot ot the mountain.There are two floors .And there is a big garden in front of the house. I like the garden because of having a lot of flowers.

There is a kitchen on the first floor. I like watching moives very much. My parents live on the second floor. I have my own bedroom. I can do what I want to do in my bedroom. I like my studyroom best because reading is my hobby. I can learn a lot when I am reading.

I love my dream home。

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇列出提綱的給材料作文。要求介紹介紹我的夢(mèng)想家園。主要用到第一人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文要點(diǎn)全，幾乎沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。能夠利用連詞，because,and 等。短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：My dream home is at the foot ot the mountain；I like watching moives very much. I can do what I want to do in my bedroom.等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。