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  同學(xué)們，咸寧市被列為首批國(guó)家旅游標(biāo)準(zhǔn)化四個(gè)示范城市之一了。讓我們也行動(dòng)起來(lái)吧！為了讓母校變得更加美好，為家鄉(xiāng)建設(shè)添磚加瓦，請(qǐng)同學(xué)們?yōu)樾�園建設(shè)積極建言獻(xiàn)策。假如你是濱海中學(xué)初三年級(jí)學(xué)生劉雨，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一份建議書(shū)。 (以上背景內(nèi)容無(wú)需表述)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1、校園環(huán)境（如：植樹(shù)、種花、運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)、圖書(shū)館……）

       2、特色課程（如：舞蹈、音樂(lè)……）

       3、……注意：1、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；詞數(shù)80左右。文章開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

  2、要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

  3、提示詞：hope; organize; interestingDear Headmaster,

  I am very glad to write to you. These days we are  talking about how  to make our school more beautiful. Here  are  some  of my  suggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________

    Thanks for your reading!

                                                      Yours sincerely,

                                                                   Liu Yu

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One possible version: (107 words)Dear Headmaster,

  I am very glad to write to you. These days we are  talking about how  to make our school more beautiful. Here are some of my suggestions.

  First, a library with a lot of interesting books in it should be built, so that we can read in our spare time every day. Second, we expect our own dancing hall and piano room. Many of us  like dancing, and some are even good at playing  the piano. Third, we dreams of having a playing-field with many flowers and green trees around. We can exercise there every day to make our body strong. Finally,  I suggest  teachers  in our school organize more colorful after- class activities for students.

  In a word, I hope our school will attract more visitors and I wish her a good future.

Thanks for your reading!Yours sincerely,

  Liu Yu